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hihi bon c pas du bjork

nop sorry allez je donne un petit indice c un clip francais

sinon mici de vos compliment mais vous voulez savoir ce qu'un gars ma dit sur un autre forum : tout plien de critiques

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I liked the first one better too. However, I think you need to study out your composition a bit better. The background looks like the wrong perspective, but it's hard to tell when its mostly all cropped out and you can't see where she is standing. The thing that bothers me most tho is the shading on her neck and face don't seem right for the lighting in the picture. It looks like you are drawing this from your imagination which is fine but you should learn how to figure where shadows would fall and how to add dimensionality to the figure. It also needs a lot more work on shading/value/contrast. I like the first one's simplicity but it does need a few accentuated details to bring it to life. Nice job on the face drawing, that is a hard angle to draw. I would just make the background more atmospheric and less sharp to give the picture depth and to keep it from looking like a bunch of flat abstract areas of color.

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ben bha c en anglais .. sorry